Sorry- here is the link for the writing example levels:
http://nationalstrategies.standards.dcsf.gov.uk/node/305573
and here is the one for the reading levels:
http://nationalstrategies.standards.dcsf.gov.uk/node/305525
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remember- think what level you are, what skills you can use. Then think and write in your own words what you could do to imporve a level. These students are your peers, your rivals if you like- do you think you could do better?
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Wednesday, March 17, 2010
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How could I do to improve a level?
ReplyDeleteI have read two level 5 writing assessments of a pupil and notice that there is some limitation within the two. However, this pupil has provided a bit of senses of form in his writing that is perfectly chosen for the readers and the purpose. The sentences are mostly supported by accurate Capital letters and full stops whenever needed yet there were lack of the use of accuracy of punctuation and commas in the sentences. Wide range of vocabularies was used carefully in order to create a certain effect.
To improve this level in writing I suggest that the pupil should be more careful with his punctuation and spelling. To think and develop his pieces more out of the box not limited in scope.
For the reading section, again I have read through the pieces and in my opinion the writer showed good understanding of the story with a brilliant choice of language in which created a certain impact upon the readers.
1 way to improve this level is to provide more persuasive evidences, quotations and embedded quotations.