Today i was abruptly woken up by my loud alarm clock and what made it even worse was that it was 5 minutes before school started. As you can see i am a person who is a heavy sleeper, lazy, and very fierce. I have only friends that are just like me. I an my friends are the only type of people were we get everything our way. All my classmates are all either nerds or geeks who are always into computers. I am the scariest person in school everyone is so scared of me that even before i even touch them as i approach them they bribe me with quite a reasonable amount of cash.
Today, I actually felt like beating up a person and get money. I figured that this idea is the best and quickest way to earn some money to by some stuff. Guess what today i managed to beat up this boy who was a nerd that was rich so I and my friends went to him.
This is my story:
After school as I came a cross a busy street full of children I saw this boy who looked quite rich with a lot of trendy items. I suddenly told my friends to tell them that that boy can help us pay for our lunch for the next three weeks so... I decided that we beat him up and get the money. My friends all agreed and so we approached him and used a trick to take him to an isolated area and beat him up. It was as easy as bending a paper. Before we even touched him he gave us money, actually he gave us even more than we expected. We soon left him with a cheap shot down under. He screamed in pain as we ran away as quickly as a cheetah.
As i walked home I suddenly felt a very strange feeling a very strange feeling indeed. I felt this feeling called guilt. I have never felt like that before. As I approached home I thinked about it. I thought it very carefully. As i was doing my homework, i suddenly felt tingles down my spine. I suddenly looked back to what i did. I felt guilty??? I don't know why? I felt so bad . I feel like i want to return that money and turn over a new leaf. I was too concerned as about my friends as i was known as the scariest person in school and then suddenly in a flash becomes a good person and give the money back. I felt very strange and confused.
We got to find out sooner or later we will wait and see. till tomorrow.
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I like your exposition, with echoes of the narrator in The Tell -Tale Heart. After that, it owuld have been nice for you to ahve used a few more descriptive techniques in order to raise tension more effectively.
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