Tuesday, February 2, 2010

Dear diary 

today was just like any other day beautiful sunny sunshine. i was walking over to school with my friend tom and that everyone was scared of us because people called us the bone crushers I'll explain that later on in the story. So me and tom were just walking to school when meet this new kid called James on the way to school and started to push him around which seemed really funny. when we reached school we see the new kid talking to my girlfriend i hated that so tom and i went over to the new kid and grab him by the shirt then throw him in to the trash can. during lunch my favourite snack which was blue berry cake i ran to get it and out of the blue the new kid James jumps out and grads it from the tray then that really triggered my anger and all i did was punch him and take thee blue berry cake from his hand. After school i see James talking to my girl friend again so i matter in to it own hand tom and i walked over to him threw him to the ground. tom held him hands and all i had to do was punch him till he started to bleed, allot of other kids came and watched us beat up this new kid we even hand one of the teacher betting money on the fight. it took us about it took me about 15 pushes to the face just to make him bleed and 23 punches to the belly to to bruise him, he was quite a fat kid. if you punched him to the belly you hand would just fly back to you and his belly would just wobble. After the fight we decided to throw him into the trash can again and we never saw that new kid ever again. 

3 comments:

  1. bahahahahahaha!!!!! u actually did the girlfren thing. and the blueberry cake. bwahahahahahahah!!!!! btw u got the stomach wobble thing from kung fu panda

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  2. hey, i thought the wobbling was genius.

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  3. Agreed, I like the wobbling too. But the reason it stands out is it it s the only image you include in your writing. Go for this more- I need to see greater descriptions of HOW things look in your writing. Simple things too , Leeam, like capital letters, need to be observed.

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