This may interest some of you regarding the narrator's unreliability in The Boarded Window. Taken from Rena Korb, Short Stories for Students:
The words he chooses to share, however, prove the narrator to be unreliable. He constantly contradicts himself, thus subverting his own authority. He says that “every well-informed boy” knew Murlock’s cabin to be haunted by a ghost, but he doesn’t say how this knowledge — which would imply that others in the region knew of what had taken place there — came to be universal. In actuality, any neighbors had little knowledge of the wife. As the narrator states, she had “preceded” her husband in death “by so many years that local tradition had retained hardly a hint of her existence”; in fact, there was no longer even any “known record of her name.” The narrator also repeatedly emphasizes the mystery of the evening in question, declaring of the boarded window of Murlock’s cabin, “nobody could remember a time when it was not [boarded up]. And none knew why it was so closed.” Almost immediately thereafter he confesses, “I fancy there are few persons living to-day who ever knew the secret of that window, but I am one, as you shall see.” Finally, he reveals how he came to be privy to the information: “But there is an earlier chapter — that supplied by my grandfather.” Thus essentially ends the role of the narrator. The rest of the story focuses on Murlock’s sad tale, and indeed ends without ever returning to the narrator.
Readers are left with the question: What is the narrator’s relation to Murlock? How does he come to know this information that no one else knows. While the narrator proposes an answer to this question — that his grandfather “had known him [Murlock] when living near by in that earlier day” — this answer is far from satisfactory. For the narrator has already described the land upon which Murlock lived as “surrounded on all sides by the great forest.” Indeed, when his wife fell ill, her care rested solely upon him because there “was no physician within miles, no neighbor.” How then, is the reader to believe that this man who elected to live, and die, in such isolation would choose to reveal his horrible story to a seemingly random person? It seems unlikely that he even has a neighbor.
A reader could likely conjecture that the narrator’s grandfather is in actuality Murlock: the narrator is privy to facts, details, and knowledge that it would appear no other living soul has, not only about the night of the panther, but about Murlock’s feelings and thoughts. The narrator explains Murlock’s lack of reaction to his wife’s death as due to the fact that “[H]e had no experience in grief; his capacity had not been enlarged by its use. His heart could not contain it all, nor did his imagination rightly conceive it. He did not know he was so hard struck; that knowledge would come later, and never go.” Of these statements, only the last could be construed from the life that Murlock went on to lead. Clearly, Murlock was devastated by the death of his wife, otherwise he would not have retreated into his isolated state. The narrator, however, presents no plausible explanation for his knowledge about how Murlock deals with grief. He even emphasizes his illogical authority when he says, “We may conceive Murlock to have been that way affected... (and here we are upon surer ground than that of conjecture).” The mystery of the narrator’s relation to Murlock is never answered in any satisfactory fashion. Readers are left to form their own opinion, based on a brief text and insubstantial evidence.
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This story is very exciting i wish i could write like that :)
ReplyDeletewow. what level would this be?
ReplyDeleteWell, the fact that Mr.P proposed that the readers may conclude about the relationship between the narrator and Murlock as grandfather and grandson was not being supported by the brief text. Why? Because the text did not clearly point out the children of Murlock and his wife. The relationship between the two is in fact a controvesal topic which has not been explained in an exceptable method.
ReplyDeleteCorrection. Acceptable method. :) It sounds to me like the best explanation mentioned so far, and is backed up with sufficient and believable evidence.
ReplyDeleteare they in our year? this is really good! some of the words i don't even get.
ReplyDeleteOh dear, I accidentally type the word "Execptable" instead of "Acceptable"
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ReplyDeletewow, i've never thought that the narrator would be Murlock's grandson o_____0
ReplyDeletei agree with nicolas :)
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome!!! It's sooooo good I agree with Nick. How could he write like that? And what level would this beeee?
ReplyDeleteSome sentences were quite hard to understand but still excellant!
silly soomin this is obviously above level 8
ReplyDeleteI know but I'm just exaggerating
ReplyDeleteUMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! people what are you guys talking about seriously I men't to say on my first comment that i wish i iiiiiii iiiii could write like that not ALLLLLAAAAANNNNN PPPOOOEEEE!!!!!!.................no.....more.......comments........... By the way i like this story very much as it is expensive.
ReplyDeletewee weee weee knoowww chatttchaaa meaannn thoooughhh
ReplyDeleteoops :D *watchhaaa
ReplyDeleteI never thought that Murlock would be the narrator's grandfather!!!!!! OMG!!!!! This explaination is exceptional!!!!!
ReplyDeleteerm... i've read it
ReplyDeleteI wish i cud write like dat, wat level wud it b? dis so good sum words i dun really get, i neva tot dat Murlock wud b da narrator's grandpa.... BYE i gotta go 2 toilet seriously BEE WAII EEE
ReplyDeletelol Vyyy
ReplyDeletenow that ive read this, the story doesnt seem that reliable as well. I think the reason why there are so many unanswer question toward the story is because its probaly fake, the author was just extending the piece to make it more sophisticated in order to publish it. And if the story was real then he probably was just exaggerating it to make the reader feel more tense and heart-touching
ReplyDeletewow Vy xD
ReplyDeletewell i think there is a possibility that Murlock was the narrator's gramps, as proven above. But i think that the narrator didn't know that because Murlock hid the truth away since he felt guilty and responsible for his wife's death.
-.- u guys r horrible spammers. and this isn't a story nick. its a review-ish thing :) and yes it is complicated. but it isn't possible that Murlock is the grandfather cos he was alone when he was holding the funeral for his wife(i think). shouldnt the children if he had any been there as well
ReplyDeleteagree w/ linus
ReplyDeleteit's just a way of telling a story. unreliable narrating makes the story more mysterious and horrific.
btw vy's post looks really familiar...
ReplyDeleteI agree in most things, but regarding the death of his wife, I think that there might be another plausible explanation. It also might be that Murlock's life is so full of grief, that he is unable to build up a visible manifestation to show his pain! This might reflect on the reasons why he moved away from civilization, in a secluded and remote location with only his wife for company. He might be running away from something, his past might have been turbulent for him, and so he ran away. (See other post comments for elaboration).
ReplyDeleteIs it also a possibility that Murlock had no wife? That it was a figment of his imagination, a hallucination forged out of his utter sadness. This might be the reason that no record of his wife, not even her name was known, whereas the narrator explains that “every well-informed boy” knew about the 'ghost' that apparently haunted the cabin. Maybe the 'death' of his wife marked the realization he had that she didn't exist, and the boarded window is something that he keeps to convince himself that she did once exist. It might give him comfort knowing that he once had something, and he clings onto that.
* I meant the post comments on the other blog post that I wrote.
ReplyDeleteaadit... u think waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too much...
ReplyDeletethinking way too much is far better than can't think of anything, plus it's called multiple interpretations which can give u high level o.o
ReplyDeleteHey all, I'm not from 9S but I'd like to make a comment anyway. :D
ReplyDeleteThis story sounds interesting, I'm going to read it. :D
Bye
Murlock is grandfather's grandson, and that's why he knows so much about him. So amazing and great truth.
ReplyDeleteWho wrote this?!!!!1 such a high level!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteIt looks like level 8 or above
i've read it but still don`t get it....
he's unreliable because there are so many questions raising the readers' mind. it doesnt make sense when he says he lives away from his neighbors at the beginning but the narrator says that he's Murlock's neighbor and he sees everything that happens in Murlock's house.
ReplyDelete(how could Linus know that I copied from other people I've already changed to my own word :-? )
ReplyDeleteVy why are you suddenly starting to write in proper non-slang English today, when the homework deadline was yesterday? I'ts just an observation...
ReplyDeleteI think that the narrator is Murlock... Because who else would know so much bout Murlock other than himself. Maybe as Aadit said, the wife was a figment of his imagination so that he wouldn't feel so lonely. IF the wife really wasn't real then why would the narrator write about her? Speacking of which IF the wife wasn't real there wouldn't even be a narrator if the narrator was Murlock's grandson. The only person that is able to describe the fake wife in so much detail is Murlock himself. So I think that the narrator is Murlock.:)
ReplyDeleteMurlock has MPD - Multiple Personalities Disorder. He acts as himself, his imaginary wife, and the grandson as the same time. I guess.
ReplyDeleteso in other words... almost every single short story mr pollicutt has given us has some sort of mad person in it... :)
ReplyDeletei agree with Michelle, paranoic!!!!!
ReplyDelete@Khuong: go back to your english class's blog
@Khuong: I'm really, really, really, really, really (x infinity) sorry for saying that. You're more than welcome to join the blog. I love your posts!
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